tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post5495670373574780504..comments2024-02-09T18:35:53.055-08:00Comments on MyRandRSpace: Chaos is All Right, right?Lady In Readhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13791002474933656220noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-46131548527539917962015-02-13T22:59:08.339-08:002015-02-13T22:59:08.339-08:00a lovely time to cherisha lovely time to cherishVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-1083843494050497722015-02-13T16:37:29.618-08:002015-02-13T16:37:29.618-08:0020? whoa... I know with little kids, it can easily...20? whoa... I know with little kids, it can easily seem like more... energetic write and very sweet... did well with form, too.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-86826434763127171722015-02-13T11:15:49.159-08:002015-02-13T11:15:49.159-08:00Oh twenty little girls, how brave you are! Your w...Oh twenty little girls, how brave you are! Your words - sweet delightful and full of energy. Lovely.<br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-9320396223938848302015-02-13T09:11:05.873-08:002015-02-13T09:11:05.873-08:00Oh I miss the time when my little girl was nine! S...Oh I miss the time when my little girl was nine! She still held my hand then. Smiles! I enjoyed this poem, and am most struck by your note about the last words Nehru read before he died. Wow.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-422663456649667992015-02-13T06:36:46.352-08:002015-02-13T06:36:46.352-08:00Lovely - so gratifying to see how you "worked...Lovely - so gratifying to see how you "worked" the form. I see you used the caesura as did Barry in the last poem I read. I am finding this form to be freeing rather than restricting. The beauty of the fours doesn't give it a square or cubic feel at all - it makes it feel like a long braid, or a babbling brook, or an exciting party of teenage girls having fun, playing games, opening presents, telling stories, making wishes. That's what "growing up" is all about and you have captured it perfectly.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-21412002365203515652015-02-13T05:09:03.683-08:002015-02-13T05:09:03.683-08:00ha. you pull off the form very naturally....there ...ha. you pull off the form very naturally....there is a nice energy in it as well...<br />of course i love balloons...i would love to go up in a hot air balloon again as well....<br />sounds like someone had a nice party...<br /><br />good to see you....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-77231521068989858332015-02-13T03:48:00.415-08:002015-02-13T03:48:00.415-08:00Oh so sweet.. The energy of those little girls cel...Oh so sweet.. The energy of those little girls celebrating.. still after a while I guess 20 girls can be a little too noisy.. :-) brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com