tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post1861971008365728551..comments2024-02-09T18:35:53.055-08:00Comments on MyRandRSpace: Verbified TuesdayLady In Readhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13791002474933656220noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-43812092334827560782017-01-26T08:47:57.943-08:002017-01-26T08:47:57.943-08:00I love the way you reinvented the verb, smile with...I love the way you reinvented the verb, smile with... <br />"smile me a yes"<br />The dialogue makes this poem even more interesting. Thanks for joining in. Mishhttp://mishunderstood.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-21723209495945705522017-01-26T05:03:22.639-08:002017-01-26T05:03:22.639-08:00This is simply breathtaking!! ❤️This is simply breathtaking!! ❤️Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-77557156949237931672017-01-25T17:57:50.162-08:002017-01-25T17:57:50.162-08:00yes, and i remember reading it many times over (an...yes, and i remember reading it many times over (and weeping each time)Lady In Readhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13791002474933656220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-45098108056080378642017-01-25T17:56:18.033-08:002017-01-25T17:56:18.033-08:00thank you Bjorn! this is more fiction than fact :)...thank you Bjorn! this is more fiction than fact :)Lady In Readhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13791002474933656220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-87638368023434298982017-01-25T17:55:27.931-08:002017-01-25T17:55:27.931-08:00Thank you De! you smiled me joy with your comment ...Thank you De! you smiled me joy with your comment :)Lady In Readhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13791002474933656220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-39242244888123534562017-01-25T17:53:54.848-08:002017-01-25T17:53:54.848-08:00thank you!thank you!Lady In Readhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13791002474933656220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-44612363717759772252017-01-25T17:53:31.132-08:002017-01-25T17:53:31.132-08:00thank you Frank.. it seemed to fit in:)thank you Frank.. it seemed to fit in:)Lady In Readhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13791002474933656220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-79312201031013255812017-01-25T17:52:04.482-08:002017-01-25T17:52:04.482-08:00thank you! though i do recall using dialogue befor...thank you! though i do recall using dialogue before in poetry, verbification in poems is a first for me too.. and i totally loved itLady In Readhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13791002474933656220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-90738307633624060252017-01-25T17:50:53.032-08:002017-01-25T17:50:53.032-08:00thank you for your comments, Lillian!
verbificati...thank you for your comments, Lillian! <br />verbification was fun and I think I am going to attempt it again.. Lady In Readhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13791002474933656220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-59287913966838990312017-01-25T13:45:04.469-08:002017-01-25T13:45:04.469-08:00Black Beauty was one of my favourite books when I ...Black Beauty was one of my favourite books when I was a kid!<br />My TTT: https://jjbookblog.wordpress.com/2017/01/24/top-ten-tuesday-93/iloveheartlandXhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10040647634981408350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-60753082004699824292017-01-25T11:38:17.104-08:002017-01-25T11:38:17.104-08:00I love the contrast between the male and female vo...I love the contrast between the male and female voice... the contrast between their needs is stunning.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-32931214396501595092017-01-25T07:36:50.466-08:002017-01-25T07:36:50.466-08:00"just smile me a yes" -- is my favorite...."just smile me a yes" -- is my favorite. Though I think I just might like to be "silvered." :) De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-25606207300884644982017-01-25T07:16:27.876-08:002017-01-25T07:16:27.876-08:00I liked the smiling a yes repeated in both stanzas...I liked the smiling a yes repeated in both stanzas and title.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-48411114558541995272017-01-25T06:26:41.434-08:002017-01-25T06:26:41.434-08:00I will link this...I will link this...Priscilla Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02564805564265436613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-86786962435918126652017-01-25T06:10:24.548-08:002017-01-25T06:10:24.548-08:00It's so interesting that you used dialogue and...It's so interesting that you used dialogue and verbification in poetry. I've never really tried using either....food for thought for me!Vedika @ Poems and Poetshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07897669780777070634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7815144040570516301.post-84956676359446304152017-01-25T03:23:40.047-08:002017-01-25T03:23:40.047-08:00What an interesting blog you have! :) Don't k...What an interesting blog you have! :) Don't know that I've visited before. So glad you posted with dVerse! I do like the way you set this up, with a dialogue between he and she. Ah many are tempted by the bling :) Tis an old-fashioned love story here. Somehow I see my mom as the she. :) lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.com